Rebecca (sobleak) wrote in virtue_inwords,
Rebecca
sobleak
virtue_inwords

agitation

I wrote a poem.... yeah. guess who its about? I worked on it for almost two hours... yet I think it could be better. give me feedback please

Agitation
You’re crawling in my skin

Agitation
stop making me scream

there are some mysterious bruises
and cuts
bite marks
oooh fun
that I blame you for

out of my mind
then in the gutter
through the sewer system
and then out into a dream

this agitation is making me go wild

why don’t I just lye in the puddle
of tears caused by you

why don’t I just kill that side affect
my beating heart
for loving you

yeah

agitation, you’re trying to crawl in my skin
slithering, you’re getting back in

I can scratch all I wish
It’ll do no good
You’ve gotten in
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